Kia ora Isaiah, You have done a fantastic job creating this blogpost about your digital passport! A digital passport sounds like such a fun idea, and it was so cool to learn some new information about you! It was awesome for you to acknowledge your teacher and share with us how you think he is great. Teachers are such wonderful people who benefit us immensely, so it is great to see how you appreciate all of the help he gives you. What is it about Mr A that you like? You mentioned in your post how you enjoy riding your bike. What kind of bike do you have, and how often do you ride it? You also mentioned how you play Minecraft on your Xbox 1. When you play Minecraft, which mode do you set it on (survival or creative) any why? QuickTip- The lime green writing is hard to read over the Minecraft logo. Perhaps if you made the writing black and slightly smaller you could position it over the blue water. This way your viewers will be able to read your writing easier. I can also see that you have included your address in this blogpost. Although this digital passport is all about you, it is important to be careful with your personal information when you are posting online. Could you please edit your blogpost and remove your address. Keep up the great work! Nga mihi
Kia ora Isaiah,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a fantastic job creating this blogpost about your digital passport!
A digital passport sounds like such a fun idea, and it was so cool to learn some new information about you!
It was awesome for you to acknowledge your teacher and share with us how you think he is great. Teachers are such wonderful people who benefit us immensely, so it is great to see how you appreciate all of the help he gives you. What is it about Mr A that you like?
You mentioned in your post how you enjoy riding your bike. What kind of bike do you have, and how often do you ride it?
You also mentioned how you play Minecraft on your Xbox 1. When you play Minecraft, which mode do you set it on (survival or creative) any why?
QuickTip- The lime green writing is hard to read over the Minecraft logo. Perhaps if you made the writing black and slightly smaller you could position it over the blue water. This way your viewers will be able to read your writing easier.
I can also see that you have included your address in this blogpost. Although this digital passport is all about you, it is important to be careful with your personal information when you are posting online. Could you please edit your blogpost and remove your address.
Keep up the great work!
Nga mihi