Isaiah you are very clever. I like your picture of the train puffing coal smoke. It reminds me of the steam train at Shantytown. You did a good job of your reading. Your voice was very clear. The music and fade out at the end was also very clever. Do you think you would like to come and read your poem to the learners in Piwakawaka/
Wow Isaiah
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I love you very much
You made me laugh.
Thank you Mum for your comment. Don't forget to bring me some pizza if I eat all my lunch.
ReplyDeleteHi Isaiah I'm Xanthe and I think you did an amazing video! How did you do it? Amazing job👍
ReplyDeleteHi Isaiah I like the part with the black coal smoke. How did you make it?
ReplyDeleteIsaiah you are very clever. I like your picture of the train puffing coal smoke. It reminds me of the steam train at Shantytown. You did a good job of your reading. Your voice was very clear. The music and fade out at the end was also very clever. Do you think you would like to come and read your poem to the learners in Piwakawaka/
ReplyDeleteWoW what lovely reading, I enjoyed the video you made...very clever..maybe you could make one about...Stop the Weather waffle!..Mrs M
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